Monday, March 30, 2009

A picture is worth a thousand words


I hear mom calling us down stairs to come and eat. My name is jenny I am six years old. I live with my mom, grandma, and my two other brothers Kenny and Robert. We don’t do to school we stay here and work on our farm. Robert was the first one up and he ran up stairs really happy and yelling and scream that today father is going to come home. Me and Kenny had gotten up an went down stairs mo told us to go and get things ready for them to eat and after they eat they have o go clean because there father is coming home today. Kenny had went to go get the milk I had went to go get the oatmeal. We had told grandma molly that father was coming home. She said that she was very happy that he was coming home. That why she was going to make a big dinner for him to come home.

She told me that she was going to make all the food that he had like. she was going to make the cornbread and the apple pie for me. I told her that it would be good. That when Kenny come and ask for the oatmeal that he was hungry. I told him that I was coming and that grandma molly was talking to me. He had gotten he oatmeal that he always eats and he got my for me . we had went to the kitchen ate the oatmeal and then we had to clean up and go clean outside. My jobs were to clean out the chicken pins and to clean out the weeds that are in the gardens. When I was done with that I had to go help mom with the dinner. While Robert and Kenny have to finish cleaning out side. Robert really little so he can help with the little things.

While I was washing the corn in the sink I heard mom telling grandma molly that there was a chance that father was not going to make it. But he said that there was also a chance that he was. Mom came in and told me to start making the dough for the bread and hat she will come and help me with the rest after I finish mixing it. When I finish mixing it I called mom in the kitchen for her to help me to shape the bread for we can put it in the oven. After that we had to making the chicken and the other things that we had to cook. We had made the chicken next because that had took along time. Kenny and Robert had came in to get the rest of the things that they need. Mom told me to make them some food for them to eat for them not to get tired while they are working Kenny thought it was funny and told mom that he didn’t wan to get sick.

She asked him why and Kenny said because jenny was making it. Kenny and everybody laugh even the dog started barking and that made Kenny laugh even more. Jenny got mad but grandma molly had came in and told him that he still had to eat it. And if he got sick that they will take care of him. Jenny started laughing at Kenny and then we hear Robert saying I don’t care if I get sick I want to eat. Then everybody laugh. Jenny got them food and then she had to wish the dishes for them to cook the next thing. Mom told jenny that there also going to cook a roast. Jenny got everything that they needed and by the time they were done the boys were done to. Everybody got clean up and got ready fot there father to come home.

While there were waiting fot the father to come home jenny ask her mother why did father leave so far away. She said that she had to it was part of what he love to do. Kenny said what go to the army far away. Her mother said yes he had no choice to go. They had sat down at the table and waited for their father. Later on the dog had came in the door and jumping on mom lap. For the food. The house had came in the window for people to feed him. Mom gave him little bit of food and jenny was giving some food for the dog but the dog never gave me none. The door open and we hearedfather come home. And we were happy to see him and that we can all eat like one big happy family.

Wednesday, March 25, 2009

PET PEEVES

1). when people tell me things more then once.
2).when people rub things in your face.
3). when my little brother crys for when we tell him no
4).when my sister acts like she older then me
5).when they touch my hair
6).when they touch my things with out my permission
7). when they go take my things with telling me
8). we people lie to my face
9).when people think that they are right but they are really wrong but they dont want to say anything.
10).when people pop their gum in your face.
11).when people juge other people when they have the same problems as that other person has
12).when people are nosey
13).people think they are better then any other person
14).when people juge me cause of my skin color
15).when people get loud for any reasons
16).when they touch my face
17).when they turn on the lights when you are sleeping
18).when you first wake up people try to talk to you alot and scream in your face
19).when they say i did something but i never did.
20). when people say they are going to do something but they end up not doing
21).when people tell me that i cant do some thing
22).when people say tings about other people family
23). when people change there mind alot.
24). when people thing that they have a bad life but they really have a good life.
25).when people try to act hard when they are really not.

Monday, March 23, 2009

The Secret

IT was my best friend's deepest darkest secret and it would be hard to keep. My Friend name is Yesenia and we been friends for along time. And we always tell each other everything. but there was this first time that she did not want to tell me like she was scared that I was going to judge her. it took me along time to get it out of her but when she was telling me she was crying because she did not want to tell anybody. we were in her room and we just go home from school we were in are third year of high school. " she told me I am not sure if I should tell you" "I told her it was ok and that what ever it was I was going to her no matter what" " she said that she was going to tell me if I don’t tell the other girls" " I told her they were are friends to " "she said that she know that but first the secret was going to be between me and her". "I told her ok and that I promise that I was not going to tell anybody that it was just between me and her " "she told me that well hear it goes well you know that me and that one guy" I asked her why was she crying that nobody was home". "she like ok well any ways yeah well do you get it where I am going with this" "I told her yeah I told have she been to the doctor" She said no not yet I have to wait until I go with my dad and then I will tell him" I told her your going to tell your dad but not your mom" " she said no your crazy because I am going to tell him that I am sick that I want to see my doctor and that I have female question to ask her". "I am like ok " Then her mom came home with her step father Bryan and when she saw him she got all scare. "she ask her mom if he was going to stay" "she said yeah why " Yesenia was scared to say anything to her while he was there' "I told her mom if she can come and stay the weekend at my house " Her mom said is that what you wanted to ask me" yes mom that what I wanted to ask you". " her mother left the kitchen and left me and Yesenia in the kitchen and she was so scared that she left to the bathroom. "Her step dad just look at her then. Then she saw him looking at her she close the door . He started laughing at her and that when her mom came and ask me were she went I told her that she went to the bathroom. "she like well jasmin and Dalia and Sandra are at the door"." I told her if they can come in." "she said for me to let them in " I told her ok and that when they came in they were like what wrong you look like you seen a ghost". " told them yeah I did she a ghost". There like who I said that there names were jasmin Dalia, and Sandra." they started laughing and that they came in we went into Yesenia room at that we were talking about volley ball and how soccer is coming up and all of us were going to be on the same team." I was like yeah so what are first games going to be and that who else was on the team." Then Yesenia came in and she said well I have to pack" "Sandra was like why are you packing". "oh because I am going to jasmine house". Then they said what time are you leaving because we are going to the movies and we wanted to see if you guys wanted to come". " I told that my mom coming in a minutes so I don’t think I can go." So they left and that some of her step dads friends had came when we open the door for the other girls to go and that we said our good bye and that when all his friends came in and that they were yelling. "is Lion there that is his house right" I told them who is Lion and there like oh my bad Bryan. Yesenia told me oh look there your mom lets go. " ok you go in the car and that I will get the book bags and your other bags for you to go to your house. when we got to my house we went into my room and she called her mom and told her that she left. after that she called her dad that she was not going to his house this weekend but next weekend she will go and se asked if I go to. "Her dad said ok and he asked her if everything was ok".she said yea dad everything fine" trying not to cry". the hole weekend we stayed in my room talking on the phone or texting Jasmin. Dalia, And Sandra. I told her to tell them but she was scared and that she will tell them in person. They over heard what we were taking about and they said what wrong. I told them oh nunthing and there like your guys are lying and that there is something wrong and telling us. I told them that there not wrong and that everything ok and that we will talk to them on morning. Or on Monday. They said ok and that my mom told me if she was pregnant I ask her why are you asking me this and she said because she is throwing up a lot and that all she wants to do is sleep and that her face Is really pale and that when she see food she runs to the bathroom. I just stood in front of my mom not knowing what to do. I kept think she I tell her and betrayed my best friend. Or should I tell her for my mom can help her to. my mom shook me from my thoughts and told me if she was rite” I told her nervously I don’t know she has not said any thing. She did not go to school until she was sure that she was. “ she told me to tell Jasmin,Dalia,and Sandra why she was not there and that the had to promise me that they will not say anything to any body. “ when I told them we were walking to her house and that they just wanted to see if she was ok.” When we got to her house her step dad was yelling at her and that her mom was not home it was just her and her step dad. He was yelling at her also that he had her in concern and he did not let her move. When I had open the door with the keys she gave just in case for when she was sleep I can I can open the door with out her step dad knowing. When he saw me and the other girls he was trying to make it look like she fell and that he was helping her up. She ran to me and the other girls and she said let me get some things and that I am going to live with one some where else. She got her things left a note to her mom and told her that she was going to live with her dad. Also that she told her that she was pregnant and she said that if you love me and care about me you will come and find me and leave Bryan as your boy friend she said that if you don’t leave Bryan then don’t even bother coming to look for me. She found out that she was and she told her father that her step dad was drinking and that he did things and that how it happen. But she did not care because she left that house he dose not know and that how it going to be. When I went to her dad house she told me that she would have never made it with out me and that she was happy that I kept her secret until she was ready to tell everybody. I told her that it was ok and that what she had me, Jasmin, Dalia, and Sandra for. To be there for there friends. Her baby is a one year old now she had a baby boy she named it after her father she has not seen or hear from her mother since the last time she wrote the letter of that night. But she live with all of her friends and he little baby with no word of her step father Bryan.

Friday, March 20, 2009

Her Mysterious Death

Her Death was due to a mysterious circumstances& I was assigned to the case. The victim is ‘5’2’ high school student 18 years old found dead in the ally cover with the trash cans. As the officer that were first called to the scene And was first telling the officer that was assigned to the case. Deceive Jazmine had made it right after they had called her. But then deceive Jazmine had made it and had saw her to her she was no stranger she was one of the rape victim that had came in two weeks early that she had been raped. Jazmine was so upset that she did not get that much time with her after she got in. But it was up to Deceive Jazmine to find her rapist and her murder. Every body that have been called to the case they were sitting in the officer when Jazmine had gotten there. Nobody remember who she was or her name until I had gotten there. Her name was sally I said. They said and you know this how we just stared on the case. I told them that she was one of the rape victim that had came in two weeks ago. No one remember because they had said that she was lying and that they can tell that she had been drinking and they told her to come back when her story had made since. Jazmine started off again with her names is sally she is 18 years old she been missing from her home for about three days now she lives with her mother and her step father. And four other brother and sisters. My boss MRS. Sanchez she had told me if I wanted to take another case because I had already known the victim and that I know to much. I told that they had called me to solve this case and that what I a gunna do.

Mrs. Sanchez had told me that I can started by telling the family that we had found there daughter and told them what had happen. I went to the family home and told them what happen to their daughter the mother was very upset and my partner and I had asked them some question on why their daughter had left and where could she have stayed since she had been gone. Her mother told her that she a had a boyfriend that did not that much far from where her father had live. They had told us that her father had live five minutes away from the school. Also that the father is really not allowed to see her and her other brother because he had been violent in the past and that he had treated them in the past that he was gunna take them away. My partner I asked if they knew the boy friend but they didn’t know any thing about him just that he didn’t live that far from her father and that his name was Jason. We had also asked if they had known anything about her being rape and her mother got some mad and upset that she had told us to leave.

Partner had told me that it was not normal for a mother to do that if they had come and told me that something happen to my kid I would have help in anyway that I can. I told him that maybe it was to soon to tell her that her daughter might have been rape. He disagree and he said that I was the right time because they had need to know everything that had happen to her. They had called them to see and talk to the person that was taking care of the body . they had told me that she had been rape before she was killed and that he was not that sure on how she die. He said that was many ways that she could have die but he was not that sure. I ask one of the ways that she could have die and he said that first of all I cant tell you because I am not that sure but I can tell you this that she was 5 months pregnant and that they can give the name of who the baby father was. I asked him what the sex of the baby was and he said it was going to be a baby boy. The father was her boyfriend Jason my partner had wanted to go but they had called him to a new case and they had said that I had to do this all on my own. I had went to the baby father house and his mother had answer the door and we told why I was there and that she told me that her son was not there. But I can tell that she was lying and that I had to come in. I had to ask her son some questions and tell hi why I was here. But it was like he knew and that he didn’t want to talk to me. I told him that it was about his girl friend he told me that he thought I was there to arrest him for stealing cars. But when told him that his girlfriend was murder all he keep asking was when and how did his happen? I had told him if he knew anything about her being pregnant and he she that his hole family had knew and that he was going to marry her and that he had already have given her a ring about two weeks ago. When had told him that when we found her she did not have a ring and that she was wearing her school uniform. He had told many things that the mother did not want to tell us on how she was rape on her ways from school by some guy that had grab her off the bus. And after that she had told us that her family really mistreated her. It was only her and her older brother . He told me that he left the house when he was 16 but he could not take his sister cuz she was only 13 years old and her mother would not let him take her. That he had felt bad that he had to leave her behind. I had asked them about if she knew the person who had rape her and her boyfriend had said that she knew of one person but she was not that sure and I ask him on sure was she and he said that she was about 80% that it was this one guy that she had dated along time ago.


That he had been follow her after they had broke-up. I asked why did they break –up and he said that he use to hit her allot and that he did not let her do anything. Also that she could not have any friends but him. Before I left the house they had told me that she ran away was because her step- father had tried to get with her that he had tried many times but she just keep pushing him away and that she will tell her brother and her brother will come to the house and that one time they had called the police and they had took the brother away. I asked for her brother name and that his name was jerry and that he was married and that he had two kids. Also that sally was the only one and her father that had kept talking to him. I asked him if the father was a good person and he said that he was and that the father knew that she was having a baby and so did her brother. I had went to the brother house and told him about his sister and her brother didn’t want to believe it all he kept saying was that he was going to kill him. I ask him who he was going to kill and he said that he was going to kill his step father because the last time that he was there he told him that he was going to get his sister before any body exec pet it and that all the tim she call the police on him she was going to pay. I asked him that what he told you.Her brother jerry had said yea that what he told me. He told me before they had taken me away that night from the house. I had went and got the ex boy friend and staring asking him questions and then I ask the step father the same question that I had asked the ex boy friend and that their story was the same that there was no change. I had went to my boss and that she had to me to get the DNA from the night she was murder and that to get a warrant to get there exboy friend to see if one or both killed her that night. I had went to go and see the body but when I went down there her brother jerry was done there crying an looking at her body and on the other table there was the parts of the baby on the table. I had went and cover it up for only where he can she the face of his sister and for where he cant see the baby. I had asked him why he was there and he said that he didn’t want to believe it when I told him and that he wanted to see if it was really his sister. I told him that when had his step father and her ex boyfriend because we think that they had something to do with her murder that night. To her brother that was no surprise that they has some thing to do with because they only wanted her for something and that they really didn’t give her that much freedom until she left and started dating Jason. I told him that he had to leave because I had to have the person tell me what had happen to her. Then he left and the person that had check the bodies he had came in and told me that it was not the step father or the ex boyfriend. I was back to square one again because I had no ones else to that had done anything or had talk to her before she die.

I had went back to the father house and ask him if he had knew anybody that she had talk to a lot and that knew about her having a baby. He told me that she a best friend named Ashley but they had gotten into a fight because Jason was he exboyfreind and that she still love himand she mad that sally had went out with him but they got over it and became friends again but after that when she found out that she was having his baby she was really mad and told her that she need o be careful because something was going to happen to her.

He ask me when can he get the body to put her to rest I told him not yet because I still need to find out what happen to your daughter . My phone had rang and I was taking to the person that was taking care of the body and that he told me that he had found another set of DNA in the body and that it was female and that before she died she had put up a fight to save her selft. He told me to look at my phone and look at the picture that he made them send me and it was her best friend Ashley.

I had went to Ashely house and I had bring her into my office and I started talking to her and kept talking to her until my boss came and told me that I had to get out for her to talk to her. I told her that it was my case and that I wanted to finish it that I almost had her and that she was going to tell what had happen that night. My boss told me to go in but I had to watch what I was saying and get her to tell me everything that she had did. And that what I did I got her to tell me everything that she had did to her and why she did it. She told me that she had follow her to the bus stop and got on with her but she didn’t see me and after she got off I got of with her to. I was wearing all black with a mask for her not to see me. She had went to the ally as normal and I hit her over and over again and I was crying and telling her why did she do this to me I thought that we were friends. After I was done it took the ring that had blong to me in the first place and I had left her there cover with the trash. I told the officer to take her away and I had walk out the room for me to know that I had found her killer but there was still one more thing that I need to do for she still can have the justice that she need.

Wednesday, March 18, 2009

how to make logandale better

What would make logandale a better school is that I don’t think that logandale Is a bad school but there be more changes that can be made in logandale like there can be no uniforms, there can be more sports, and then you can have better food. Do you really want to make logandale a better school?

Kids they want to come to a school that has no uniforms they will want to wear what ever they want but logandale can make it where there is no uniforms but they can also say that it has to be appropriate. Also that some kids they don’t have the white shirts that they school might want them to wear so they have to go and spend all this money because the school has a uniforms. They aslo have all these rules that they have to follow so for them they don’t want to be here but if they change some things maybe they will go and change the rule that they have to wear no uniforms.

Also that they can have more sports that will make more kids get involved and they will want to come here. But they will have to make better for the girls to play. All we play is boy sports even though they say that all the sports girls can play to but what I they dot want to play those sports. You can put them in group of the sports that the want to play. If they want to play with the boys they can play with the boys but not many will want to play with them they will want to more games like volley ball and things like that. You can put them in groups but they have to play they just cant sit there and talk. I really think that logandale can be a better school If you just change a little but of things don’t you think?

The last thing that you can change about logandale is that they can have better lunches. Like for the 8th graders they can go home and eat but they have to coke back to the school. They don’t want to be here and eat bad food and then they will come back and then they will want to learn. They will have a better time at school,. They will want to learn and that there will be no problems with them not wanted to learn. Also that they can change that every body they don’t want to drink milk but they have to because there is no other thing to drink. If they want other things to drink they have to but it but I don’t think that the students have to buy it they should just make it wear that what they get to drink

These are my reason on how they can change logandale and make it a better place for the students if you had all these things in your school wouldn’t you want to come to this school?

Monday, March 16, 2009

jazmine draganowski life

THE day that my daughter was born was the best day of my life. when i brought her home everybody just fell in love with her. Jazmin's father was there for a while then when she as about 3-6 months he had left. I knew that it was going to be OK and that i was to be able to rise her and her brother. when she was two years old we had move to new house and Jazmine thought that it was the best thing. We move and she was happy her and her brother made Friends really easy. when Jazmine was about 7 years old we told her that she was going to be a big sister but she really did not like that. Then she will tell us that is will be OK if it was a girl. Jazmine was really mad because we told her that it was a boy. When i was pregnant with her baby brother we had went to mexico for my fiance for him to met the family. then we Jazmine was 8 years old we had went to new mexico becasue i was geting married. Jazmine look happy a first but then i saw that she was not that happy. she will tell her brother that every thing going to change and that she didnt want him aroung that she wanted himed him to go away. but Then when she was 10 years old we had told everybody that i was going to have a baby and that she was going to be a big sister again. she said that she didnt care and that it had to be a boy because she didnt want to have a baby sister that she wanted to be the only girl. and she will tell her step father that she wanted to be the only girl. when Jazmine was 11 years old she was in middle school and that she will talk about old times and she would say that at first she didnt like her step-father but now she said that it was a good thing that happen. when her sister was born she was ok with it she really did not pay attention that much because she was older and to her it really did not matter. then when it came close to the end of the school year of 6 grade she was happy beacsue it was almost over and she could not wait for the summer. but when she found out that she had to go to summer school she was not that happy. then when she told us that she had to do the 6 grade all over again she was very sad that she had to do it again. when she was 13 years old her uncle from her father side he had died and that was the only uncle that she had talked to. she knew that she had a half brother from her father but she really never talked to him until that day. when she was 14 years old her step-father he had died of a heart attack and that really hurt her because that was the closest person beside her grandfather as a father figure. The move for her was like a big problem for her she did not want to leave and that she didnt want to leave her friends. just last year she ahd one of her and her brother childhood friend that had past away and that really hurt her alot. now she had just turn 15 in january 21,of 09 and that she just cant wait for she to end and she wants to graduate. she just wants to go to high school and just do things on her own.